Peer feedback

Most of our classmates are choose to do non-fiction, like documentary or interview, just our group and Denis’s group choose to do fiction.

Denis’s group

They made a mystery and detective story, the most interesting thing is they give two option for viewers to choose, and which you choose will affect the end. It’s very good idea and can grab the audience’s attention. And the footage they shot are very good, they choose suitable angle and suitable scene, and the action scenes are awesome  make audiences feel intense and exciting with the development of plot. But the film’s rhythm is a little bit fast, and make me confused about the end.

Julian’s group

The topic of Julian’s group is food, it is a very interesting and it is also can show the different culture, they choose Queen Victoria Market is representative. But they just put the camera and choose wide shot, and we just can hear the  interviewee’s voice. It is make people can not pay attention to what the interviewee said, and the scenes are not about the content。


We all got lots of problem during our production, it is very necessary to make a plan before the shot, it will save your time and make our production organization, and I think it is the reason we need to write the proposal first.

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